Comments on: Can Some Edit My Essay. Who Is The Most Influential African American. What Info Can I Add?

By: ole max.

ole max. — Sat, 02 Jan 2010 06:56:18 +0000

Essay? no. Rant ? yes. nice try buckaroo.

By: Lil' Wayne

Lil' Wayne — Sat, 02 Jan 2010 05:47:29 +0000

This looks like it could have been written by Obama his damn self

By: Troll Hunter

Troll Hunter — Sat, 02 Jan 2010 04:21:49 +0000

LMAO

By: Precinct 1099

Precinct 1099 — Fri, 01 Jan 2010 22:28:16 +0000

Some of your information is incorrect or missing and your lack of paragraphs will definitely lower your grade. It sounds more like a one sided propaganda piece that paints how wonderful you think he is but doesn’t balance it with some of the negative things about him which it seems you have conveniently omitted.
He did work for several law firms. It would help if you could state what his solutions are which you have not nor has he. Just because he might be elected president doesn’t mean he has the power to eliminate racism or discrimination.
Obama was not from the projects or raised in a poor family nor were his acncestors slaves like the majority of black Americans.. You forgot to mention his sociaist influences and his plans for change include forcing America to support the rest of the world even more through his Global Poverty Act. He is an exception not the rule. He is biracial not black. Get your facts straight. I would give you a “C-”

By: Joe Schmo

Joe Schmo — Fri, 01 Jan 2010 20:59:20 +0000

First of all, he isn’t even a fully african american.
Secondly, where he may be inspiring to some, I believe he is a load of crap.
I absolutely hate the line “As President, Obama will represent people of all colors: Blacks, Latinos, Asians, Native Americans because we all share the same values and face the same problems”.
What the heck is that!?
What about the rest of the people?
Don’t hand this in, it’s ridiculous.
Actually, you’re right, that is who he will be representing, and no one else. He’s a racist, the only reason he’s going far in this campaign is because he has the following of the colored people, no other reason. He’s an idiot, I hope to god he never becomes president. We need someone who believes in equality, not just elevating the colored race.
My verdict = bad
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By: shoneste

shoneste — Fri, 01 Jan 2010 19:35:58 +0000

Pretty sure it’s Condi Rice today.
And before it was Colin Powell.
Despite Obama getting masses to come to rallies and chant with him – he doesn’t have much influence on what actually happens in America.
You might want to add some more facts and accomplishments. It’s too much personal opinion and you will be graded as having a “fluff” piece with little content.

By: VCGirl22

VCGirl22 — Fri, 01 Jan 2010 16:25:07 +0000

Well… I don’t know if him becoming President would end racism, since it is a disease that has plagued our nation for many years. Good info tho….I’m sure all the anti-Obamans hate that you posted it. Keep on truckin’

By: L. Ellington (RIP MJ)

L. Ellington (RIP MJ) — Fri, 01 Jan 2010 11:51:20 +0000

Well…it’s incorrect to begin with…Obama is a bi-racial American…contrary to those who endorse the ignorant one-drop rule. It is the epitome of racism.

By: Ryan

Ryan — Fri, 01 Jan 2010 09:42:34 +0000

Eddie Murphy should be added.